Blog Entry #8
February 18, 2010
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The Introductory Paragrah
The intro paragraph is the first impression for the paper. It has to start with some kind of hook to get the reader interested in your piece at first glance. This is very important because alot of people judge work off the first line and wont read it if it doesnt draw them in right away. A few ideas they have for the hook are a surprising fact, a quote, something funny or a quote. It all depends on the context of your paper and what is most appropriate. The next few lines of the intro explain your subject a little bit and ends with a thesis statement.
A Proper Introduction
In this article, what not to do in an intro paragraph are explained. The examples they give are as follows:
- Do not apologize or be unsure about your piece
- Do not announce your paper like “In this paper I will…” or “I will be explaining…”
- Do not use a dictionary are webster definition
- Do not add to much fluff or dance around your topic
When they talk about the first line of the intro, a different suggestion that is given is quoting someone famous.
It was helpful looking at both of these articles. It was very clear what to do and what not to do when I write my intro. I liked the suggestions both articles had about what to use for the first line of my paper. I will definately look into these options.
Summary Content Provided By…
“A Proper Introduction.” Guide To Grammar And Writing. CCC Foundation, Web. 18 Feb 2010. <http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/GRAMMAR/intros.htm>.
Fleming, Grace. “The Introductory Paragraph: Start With A Great First Sentance.” About.Com.2010. About.com, Web. 18 Feb 2010. <http://homeworktips.about.com/od/paperassignments/a/introsentence.
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