Blog Entry #13

April 5, 2010 saunderskatejnwp

Cohesive Writing

I am having some trouble in this area and will probably get further help with it. I was told in my peer review that this is a weak point in my writing, however, I have done a few things to help my paper flow.

At the end of my intro, I tie things together and leave a few open questions which will be answered in the rest of my paper. I think this helps lead into the lit review which is where alot of holes are filled and things are explained.

At the end of the lit review I tied things together by talking about how all of the literature helped me in guiding my topic and answered alot of questions for me. I also talked about where I wanted to go in my own research based off the lit review. I think this helps go into the method section because that is where I talk about how I will go about doing my own research on my topic that I have been discussing throughout the beginning of my paper.